A Wednesday in Spring

My first essay for my creative non-fiction writing class, pre-workshop:

1. A Wednesday in Spring

The specific song I was listening to on my iPod at the moment I wrote of was "Vacant Sky" by I'm Not a Gun. I'm pretty sure it was immediately followed by "As Far As Forever Goes."


3/7 update:

Here it is again, without all those blatant, embarrassing errors.
2. A Wednesday in Spring (First Revision)


3/24 update:

Actually, don't read either of these. I'll have a revised version up before long.